The Magical Ring.

 There was a girl named Simran. Who's what to visit new places but her parents was very poor they can't afford food so how they can visit new places. One day Simran asked from God why she is poor why she can't fulfill her dream why she can't visit new places? One day she was siting on roof and found a ring. She wore that ring and suddenly a fairy came in front of Simran because that was a magical ring. She asked to the fairy to fulfill her dream and fairy granted her. After that, whenever she wants anything , fairy bring those things at her home. Like this way Simran visited new places.

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  1. It was great content but I found that outline could be less because it was looking in a sequence, the suspension and the missing dialogs were missing. I hope you take care about it next time. All the very best for the story. 👍😃

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